For a nicely drawn an animated short, there was a shockingly little amount of effort put into the writing. It's a shame that the hard part was done before you'd worked out a decent enough joke to make that effort worth it.
The joke of this would be better summed up in a single image with how little there was to it. In fact, it has been summed up in a single image multiple times, because it's not at all original. You get 2 stars instead of 0 for the animation and art alone... because there's nothing else to this really. Wasn't worth watching.
Had a funny idea, had the artistic talent. But the lack of humour and bad pacing quickly made this boring. There were very noticeble moments of nothing happening. I wanna say the silence was loud, if that makes sense. And then the Korra bit at the end I totally don't get. I'm not sure what the joke was meant to be. I guess you just dislike Korra? If so, felt silly you'd put that in when you're just gonna bother the majority of Avatar fans. Because Korra's series is more popular than Aang's.
You lose a star each for: bad pacing, many potential jokes not used, letting everyone know you don't like Korra like we'd even care.
having said that, I'd like to see more Avatar movies from you.
Some people like the quiet. Some folks don't.
How could you want another animation after having said what you did? You're the kind of people I don't make these for. Haha.
I appreciate the effort to input though, thanks.
Instant use of memes followed by lack of humour. Don't make anything like this again please.
Well thats my humour yah know. I had no idea what to put in the animation so I just put the troll face... anyways have a great day!
What rubbish. You've not explained why Cadance is so small, so I guess you just messed up drawing her. I clicked the mute button hoping it'd get rid of the irritating noise you have looping, but sadly it only stopped the nice music.
As for animation, Cadance looks like she's just a still image being moved a tiny bit up and down. And that's it. All 3 scenes are equally lazy and lacking in movement. The cumming goes super quick.
The ONLY thing that makes this go from a 0, to a 0.1 is that the ending frame is kinda cute. This has nowhere near enough effort or skill put into it though to deserve the score it has. Infact it should have been blammed.
The name and start up makes me think this is gonna be super erotic. But then the sound effects happen and I'm just left laughing!
It's good and all, but this should be submitted to a GIF site, not a flash site. EIther go all the way and add sounds and buttons, or go back to imageshack.
This will always look more like a pIkachu eating a penis rather than sucking it. As such, I find it horrifying. What a suitable day to have watched it.
Not even Clockday is an excuse for that. Learn how to compress your spam movies.
fuck off lockfucker
I've been 5ing every clock movie I've come across, until now. I cannot will myself to vote high on this utter shit. I know it's against the law to vote 0 on Clockday, but I just can't do it. I am so sorry Strawberry, please forgive me.
The mic quality was almost bad enough to make me close this half-way through. It made it hard to focus on the good animation. It was the only problem, but it is a big one. Also the theory was pretty funny.
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