Tails-Lock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[First FBF (bouncy ball)]

Uh, not quite.

That's not really FBF. In FBF you're meant to redraw every frame, not just not use tweens. So draw the ball falling, and add more frames for when it hits things. Also you really need to improve your physics. That did not move like it should do with real gravity. But keep practicing, don't stop. You'll be great in no time.

Owl-Towel responds:

Thanks dude i was but i just wanted to get this one out quick when i have the time i will make a better one with better physics and stuff and thanks dude!

[First Flash Fish]

I don't want to type in this little bit here.

Well Kyjast is right that FBF looks better, but for someone of your skill level I'd suggest not going near FBF for quite a while. Just keep learning how flash works and improve your artistic and animation styles. Then move onto FBF when you are ready.

Oh and this movie was awful...Lucky for you this was Clock Day.

Owl-Towel responds:

Thanks for the bit at the end

[Marry ann tigress (loop)]

What?

How on earth did you manage to get this up to 3.7MB? You BADLY need to learn to compress your movies. As for the movie quality, pretty poor. It's no more than a slightly animated still image, though well drawn. The tail looks wrong when moving. I know you're still practicing flash and all your movies are nothing big, but I was hoping for something a tad better, especially after several months of waiting. It seems like your first submission, the Okami one was your best out of these all. I hope I don't sound too harsh here, but I just am not seeing improvment.

Yiffmasters responds:

Well thanks for the comment I have not had the time to sitdown and work on flash as much as I would like to. I want to make a frame by frame animation so that it will look smother. But that will take for ever. I will have new animations posted later.

[The Awesome Box : Portal]

Dissapointment

Not only was this bad, but it made me get my hopes up then destroy them. This does not deserve to have Awesome in it's name. The best part about this was the preloader thingy, it had good music.

[H.]

DAMN!

this isn't just a crappy spinoff...it's worse, you're basicly the clock crew 2. this has 0 originality to it. That flash, regardless of the crew, failed miserably. Please do not make this crew.

[WarpZone does ClockDay!]

!!!!!

You joined only yesterday and you made a flash movie on that very day. though that is rare, what i believe has never happened is that the movie has been good. You just did that though, i am shocked.

WarpZone responds:

See, the trick is, I already knew Flash before I came to visit the Clock Crew forums. There are probably a lot of skilled Flash artists here at Newgrounds who could do the same thing, if they felt like it.

[3 Second Collab]

something's wrong.

The preloader gets stuck at 18% even though it says the file is fully downloaded, and it gets stuck at the guy shooting me... i liked it though.